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Post by aj on May 9, 2004 3:37:18 GMT -5
Write a poem, in any form using the following words: build, drawn, open, alive, and ammend I was a little kinder this time, Jaysie. LOL! |
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Post by melissa16 on May 14, 2004 13:41:59 GMT -5
i build my hopes on every dawn
alive again to start the day
and from the night-rest, strength is drawn
will today be as i hope?
open-mind to what will be
for yesterday we can't ammend
we have the chance 'till daylight ends
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Post by aj on May 14, 2004 13:59:02 GMT -5
Very nice. I like this line: I build my hopes on every dawn. Lovely and hopeful opening.
-AJ
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Post by melissa16 on May 15, 2004 1:13:34 GMT -5
thanks...was aiming for it to be not quite as morbid as my other poems...lol!
cheers-Lissa
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Reality Bytes
been around the block
I spend too much time on my computer...
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Post by Reality Bytes on Dec 5, 2005 15:59:19 GMT -5
Every performance, the curtains are drawn closed,
then opened.
Every cell feels alive as pressure builds,
The set has been ammended,
Before we walk out on stage.
And then we act,
Failing in our attempts,
To be so alike
Yet So different
From what we've been before.
This band or chior,
What ever it is,
Always pretends to be ice,
but underneath we are bubbling
With excitement and fear.
This is life at its best and worst.
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Post by aj on Dec 16, 2005 16:50:12 GMT -5
Oh excellent, Reality! Nicely done! -AJ  |
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Reality Bytes
been around the block
I spend too much time on my computer...
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Post by Reality Bytes on Dec 16, 2005 20:13:49 GMT -5
thanks
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Post by korngurl1984 on Feb 17, 2007 22:21:20 GMT -5
She is drawn in by his beauty. A promise to build a bright and happy future. To show her how to feel alive and free. She is open to all possiblitys. Not once does she amend to the pain and sorrow. Thinking it will pass in time due to the possibility of the bright future he promises. But he is a lie, a coward, hiding behind her to sheild the truth. Okay I know thats not that good but I was inspired by these five words to try to write a poem for Amber Frey seeing how I just read her book about the Scott Peterson case.
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