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Post by Yellie on Mar 7, 2003 19:33:55 GMT -5
Your song slowly soaks,
into my fragile skin,
and love closes in.
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Post by aj on Mar 8, 2003 10:40:05 GMT -5
Your rhythm pulsates
strong with the pace of my blood
and I am reeling!
-Someone replied to one of my Haiku with a Haiku and I thought I'd give it a try!
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Post by engarde on Mar 9, 2003 6:56:00 GMT -5
We can only hope Yellie replies back with something as good as both of these!
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Post by millilou on Mar 13, 2003 21:05:54 GMT -5
I could not begin
to write the beautiful poem
this song has become
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Post by Yellie on Mar 14, 2003 14:05:22 GMT -5
know me in your voice,
shaking and shy, burning,
curling up smiles.
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Post by Maryann22 on Mar 14, 2003 14:19:23 GMT -5
nice job
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Post by aj on Mar 14, 2003 15:23:00 GMT -5
Each note resonnates
within my sorrowful skull
and peace is reborn!
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Post by Yellie on Mar 14, 2003 19:39:42 GMT -5
Okay poets, I sort of tried to sort these out to become a string...a history...a poem of verses of Haiku...wrote another verse to it as u see to have it connect...here we go:
I could not begin
to write the beautiful poem
this song has become
Each note resonates
within my sorrowful skull
and peace is reborn
now your song is calm,
now your voice is calling,
Now reaching inwards
Your song slowly soaks,
into my fragile skin,
and love closes in
Your rhythm pulsates
strong with the pace of my blood
and I am reeling!
know me in your voice,
shaking and shy, burning,
curling up smiles.
I did not write this alone!!
Please don't hesitate to suggest another way to make this string complete!
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Post by aj on Mar 14, 2003 19:42:19 GMT -5
Excellent!
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Post by Matt on Mar 15, 2003 11:53:40 GMT -5
You love me with each note,
you hold me with each tone,
I'm alive.
I dont know if its any good, but I gave it a try.
Thanx this is great
Matt.
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Post by Alexia on Mar 16, 2003 15:39:23 GMT -5
Your harmony quickens
The beat of my heart
And fills me from within.
Figured I'd give it a try to....I know nothing about this kind of poetry but I would sure like to learn....
Alexia
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