mum

[WeepingDragon]

she's always there
always around
always watching my every move
i ask nicely
but she doesn't move
she doesn't let me have my time
and when she does
it's too late
the thoughts to enter
disappear
sure i love her
how could you not love your mother?
some people don't
but they have reasons
it takes a lot to hate your mum
i love my mum
i just wish she'd give me more time
time to my lovers
time to my friends
time to me

['the'*devil*]

great write

[Tiny]

hey darlin'
i'm a bit like that
mums always around
still love her
but she's always around
and needing time to myself

Tiny

[paxia]

Hey, I can see where you're coming from...and I bet I'm not the only one...yeah, sometimes mothers are a real pain, but it's hard not to love your mother. Good write.