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HAKIU?
Feb 18, 2003 17:10:36 GMT -5
Post by millilou on Feb 18, 2003 17:10:36 GMT -5
A whisper of sound
capturing the pure essence
of one lucid thought
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tinman
just a little green
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HAKIU?
Mar 4, 2003 21:01:44 GMT -5
Post by tinman on Mar 4, 2003 21:01:44 GMT -5
You have captured the meaning of hakiu perfectly.
I write mostly hakiu and sonnets this is really good.
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HAKIU?
Mar 5, 2003 18:06:39 GMT -5
Post by arynichole on Mar 5, 2003 18:06:39 GMT -5
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HAKIU?
Mar 5, 2003 21:46:50 GMT -5
Post by engarde on Mar 5, 2003 21:46:50 GMT -5
I don't know how I missed this one....
I like the image, especially the "whisper"
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HAKIU?
Mar 8, 2003 22:26:58 GMT -5
Post by millilou on Mar 8, 2003 22:26:58 GMT -5
Thanks. I won a contest with this one once. The theme was to write a haiku explaining haiku. This is a fun form, don't you think. I also like the different forms of sonnets and writing roudeau is really a challenge. Someday I may try the other forms on this site. It's always fun and rewarding to learn something new. There is truly some good talent here and it's an enjoyable experience. I'm glad I found PoetAnon. |
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