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Post by Elisha on Jun 1, 2003 22:25:09 GMT -5
My rhyming ways you're free to hate But I'll just tell you this If you lack meaning in my poems There's something that you've missed My notions are not preconcieved I'd never sink that low And there are meanings in my rhymes That no one else could know And deeming this a simple game Is sorry and it's hurtfull And if you would expand your mind Then you COULD rhyme with purple You say rhyming poems must die And you're free to state your mind But don't compare art with a game This thing that's so divine I put emotion in my words And you, you must be blind If you can say it's meaningless This wonder that is rhyme
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JamesB
just a little green
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Post by JamesB on Jun 1, 2003 22:58:35 GMT -5
oh elisha, that was so well done, I feel sorry for that girl who said purple doesn't rhyme. Very good though!
-James
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Post by Elisha on Jun 2, 2003 16:10:21 GMT -5
thanx james. I was just trying to prove that all rhyming poems aren't meaningless. Purple was a little hard to rhyme with though. I'll talk to you later, Luv alwayz Elisha
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Tiny
been around the block
***Everyone deserves to be loved***
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Post by Tiny on Jun 2, 2003 18:04:12 GMT -5
wow Tiny
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