That's my view

[WeepingDragon]

so unfair isn't it
life
that guy
the one you dream of
even when you are awake
friends
seem to be by your side
really there are none
you are alone
every problem you face
isn't really there
it's made up by your choices
your choices
control your destiny
so beware
thoughts control you
actions control you
your life
is only in your hands

[Tiny]

sounds about right
this is a terrific poem
WeepingDragon
keep posting
you are very good at it
this poem has so much meaning
and really
it sounds a bit like me

Tiny