Three Days Awake

Jaysie poet poet/mod "If I had all the words, I would write myself out of here" Posts: 1,249	Three Days Awake Jun 20, 2003 16:10:00 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Jaysie on Jun 20, 2003 16:10:00 GMT -5 Sleepless Mid-April night His head rests on my chest His quiet affords me no peace In through the window the breath of dawn creeps His lips feel weightless on my skin His depression so deep Three days awake Sleepless
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onemorething mod team Posts: 507	Three Days Awake Jun 20, 2003 20:17:54 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by onemorething on Jun 20, 2003 20:17:54 GMT -5 this is the best rictameter. it is the very best work ever!

Restless mod team Posts: 579	Three Days Awake Jun 21, 2003 23:09:55 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Restless on Jun 21, 2003 23:09:55 GMT -5 beautiful as always.......this one is my most favorite!!!!! i love "his quiet affords me no peace".........so much said just in that phrase.
	"Being grown up isn't half as fun as growing up.....these are the best days of our lives. The only thing that matters is just following your heart, and eventually you will get it right" -Ataris-