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Post by WeepingDragon on Jun 1, 2003 5:41:57 GMT -5
I feel the only time I get to see you Is when there is a blue moon Never near often Never forgotten I lost track of the next blue moon But I never forgot the last I’ll never forget That night under the stars On a blanket on the ground Nothing but us But Will a blue moon never come again? Will I never see you again? Will my love for you fade? Or will you haunt me forever? These days I pray a blue moon will never come
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Post by Elisha on Jun 1, 2003 22:38:09 GMT -5
Beautiful, absoulutely beautiful. I love this poem. The ending suprised me though
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JamesB
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Post by JamesB on Jun 1, 2003 22:55:32 GMT -5
I love it too! It's great, and unlike elisha , the ending doesn't suprise me! I know how that is sometimes... I wrote about it in my poem "Carousel". Keep up the good work! -James
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Tiny
been around the block
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Post by Tiny on Jun 1, 2003 22:59:48 GMT -5
love it it was absolutely beautiful it was like wow the ending was a surprise like elisha i thought it would say something like i can't wait til the next blue moon but it was still good Tiny
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