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Post by Jaysie on Jun 14, 2003 22:43:47 GMT -5
Further Shrinking skyline Rearview mirror of life Familiar orange haze of dusk My knowing faces, known corners, my home This whole lifetime litters its streets Driving from Love's slow dance Chicago sky further
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Post by Restless on Jun 14, 2003 22:49:06 GMT -5
"Rearview mirror of life"..........I really dig that line! Nice job! ;D
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Post by Restless on Jun 14, 2003 23:15:01 GMT -5
Oh yeah..........and please oh please repost "Sleepless"!!!!! I love that one sooooo much and I'd like to RE comment on it!!!!!!!! ;D
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Post by Alexia on Jun 17, 2003 19:43:37 GMT -5
BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And that's all I got to say!
Alexia
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