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Post by Restless on Jun 14, 2003 23:12:07 GMT -5
Hell taunts and tempts him Soul: desires earth's flesh His mind yearns for our living world- but he crossed over; only ashes left Once a boy loved in our realm now forever searching for his new home- Heaven
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Post by Jaysie on Jun 15, 2003 0:40:06 GMT -5
A phenomenal write. Thanks for sharing these heartfelt words with us!!
(I know who this about, but because you are an artist, you leave room inside the interpretation to make me feel at home inside your words!)
God Bless the Artist who can bring you inside thier world. This was me in your write... REVELING!!
This is in my top five Restless poems!!!
Jay
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Post by Alexia on Jun 15, 2003 9:44:04 GMT -5
Exceptionally great write R........! Right there on top girlie.....loved it!
Alexia
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Post by Restless on Jun 15, 2003 22:33:31 GMT -5
Thank you soooooo much ladies!!!!
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