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Post by Restless on May 22, 2003 21:08:49 GMT -5
Sunset Breathtaking view heart beating for his kiss we laugh, we sing, we dance away he makes me forget to remember time time that is lost in his arms now we gaze at each other dawn is nearing Sunrise
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Post by Jaysie on May 25, 2003 13:11:50 GMT -5
I loved this one, Restless. Great write!
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Post by Alexia on May 25, 2003 13:19:51 GMT -5
How soothing, how sweet and how very very romantic.......great write Restless.....I loved it.
Sincerely
Alexia
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Post by Restless on May 25, 2003 14:53:16 GMT -5
Thank you Alexia..........I love your work so that means alot to me!!! And aaaaaaahhhh yes that was a romantic evening.......although very very long ago!
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Post by Alexia on May 25, 2003 15:33:46 GMT -5
Then just hold on to that long ago memory for it seems to have meant a great deal.......and as it brought me comfort reading it I'm certain it will forever do the same for you......!
Sincerely
Alexia
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Post by unburntflame on May 25, 2003 21:31:09 GMT -5
i love it!! i didn't know what rictameter poetry was...but now i realise i've written some of that of my own...lol. great write, restless!! ;D
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Post by Restless on May 26, 2003 0:56:10 GMT -5
Thank you ubfl........and everyone else!!!!
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