Crazy Room

[kawazu13]

spinning in circles, wandring around
jump over moutains, fall into the ground
soft walls for me, nobody to hurt
no trees no sky, not even no dirt
food through through a hole, they put in the door
little hiddne lights, and padding on the flooor
reciting poems, off the top of my head
am i alive, or am i dead
does anything matter, while i am here
doing my doings, with nobody near
they all say im crazy, but what do they know
you would be to, if you had nothing to show
for the pain of love, the pain of none
for trying so hard, no time for fun
but locked here alone, only i can win
nobody to hurt, so i cant sin
thinking all day, i might get somewhere
but if i dont, do i really care
with so walls so soft, and my arms by side
noone to hide from, so no need to hide
i live here now, may die as well
but what will it matter when i get to hell
no now ill bounce, and sitt and stand
and eat and sleep, its all too grand
being crazy got me here, it is what i do
i get to be crazy, green, gray, black, white, blue

[lilphotogal]

I really like your poem. The line "nobody to hurt, so I cant sin" I don't know why but it really srtuck me. You're great , keep it up. ~lilphotogal

[kawazu13]

thank u so much for the great imput... im glad sumbody likes my stuff. ill b lookin 4 urs

[LittleLostGirl]

Hey, I think this poem is really good..I like it!