Good-bye

[Devi145]

The sunset peaks softly over the lightly lit land,

Trees whipping gently in the breeze with poise and dignity,

Tall on their roots and beautiful as they stand...

I wish this moment could last for an infinity.

The nature creeping among the life, living breathing, taking in all other's strife.

Wish it could be that simple when it came to having strength and pride...

We humans take these seconds for granted and spend the minutes wasting away...

What we should be doing is portraying and hoping to God that he hears our pray.

Smiling among the dancing petals of flowers that gently float within the wind,

Today I'm here to thank the lord for my good friend...

I'm not taking this time to write out my feelings and thought

I'm just watching in the distance as the sun rises to show me compassion,

For all of those days i've stood out in the cold and faught...

No need to worry, No need to cry...

Just wandering along watching the stunning views until that very day i must say,

Good-bye.

[Dancergirl88]

hey well most of the time i really don't like poems that are wrote like this one but for some reason i really like it you did a great job!

[Devi145]

Thanks! even though this is one of my least favorite poems lol, Sweet night was a real good one to me. I love getting feedback on my writing style though, thank you again.



Liz