a fickle thing

gooba
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a fickle thing May 28, 2003 20:06:42 GMT -5

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Post by gooba on May 28, 2003 20:06:42 GMT -5

love is such a fickle thing
i give it too much thought
doesnt matter what i do
i always come up short
ive decided to put an end to this sh*t
let it just play out
see what cards i get dealt
and then get up and shout
just hang out with my llamas
and live in a mushroom stool
hang out with all my friends
down by the cream cheese pool

i was here but now im gone, i left my name to turn you on, those who knew me knew me well but those who dont can go to hell!

Elisha
poet

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a fickle thing May 29, 2003 19:05:57 GMT -5

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Post by Elisha on May 29, 2003 19:05:57 GMT -5

I love this! it's so creative, and true.(well exept for the last part, I hope) I mean love is fickle. Or maybe it's people that are, who knows. It's amazing how overused that word is, love. I've used it twice already in like three lines. Oh well, the poem is great! Keep it up.
Luv ya,
Elisha

Last Edit: May 29, 2003 19:07:26 GMT -5 by Elisha

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