lilphotogal
still rather new
...and each seperate dying ember wroght it's ghost upon the floor
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Post by lilphotogal on May 26, 2003 14:01:49 GMT -5
~I Hold in My Hand a Key~
I hold in my hand a key, It could unlock a million things. World peace, harmony, The concepts are not foreign to this glorious key. But in the other hand I hold a lock, A dreadful piece of metal. The lock prevents all happiness, And shuns away those in need. The key may undo the lock, Or the lock may reject the key, And though this might confuse you, They are you and me. Within every person resides, A lock and key or two, Which one shall win, That is up to you.
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Post by Elisha on May 26, 2003 15:54:06 GMT -5
I really like this poem, it shows a lot of feeling and I love the analagy. Keep it up, girl you've got a talent. Luv, Elisha
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JamesB
just a little green
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Post by JamesB on May 27, 2003 0:02:49 GMT -5
Great analogy like Elisha said. I like the creativity. Keep it up.
-james
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