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Post by Elisha on May 21, 2003 13:24:14 GMT -5
Running in circles untill I fall down Screaming and screaming while no one's around Muddy and barefoot, I dance in the rain And break all the mirrors to end all the pain I pick all the flowers and walk on the grass And spit on the sidewalk as people walk past Sometimes go for days without saying a word Climb on the roof and act like a bird Bite people's ankles and bark at old men And yell things at people because I don't win I know that I'm childish, it's just so much fun Better than acting just like everyone Maybe I'm crazy and mabe I bite But maybe I love it and that is alright.
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Post by unburntflame on May 21, 2003 19:51:41 GMT -5
*applause* well done!! i loved it! the crowds want more!!!!!!!!!! ;D
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JamesB
just a little green
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Post by JamesB on May 21, 2003 22:21:20 GMT -5
I like this idea! You never cease to stun me with your creativity!
Great imagery... I got a terrific mental image from that one. Keep it up.
-James
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Post by Restless on May 22, 2003 22:14:26 GMT -5
Great job! This one was excellent! I used to be just like that when I was younger..........you made me miss those crazy "i don't care what you think of me" days!!!
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TrappedDespair
been around the block
How did it come to this...
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Post by TrappedDespair on May 23, 2003 17:39:20 GMT -5
i really like this one its flows nicely and is original. i think its one of your best ive read yet!
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