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Post by anticaged on May 19, 2003 23:59:33 GMT -5
the world keeps turning yes it just keeps turning you don't know the pain what I have to do to gain the lies are exploding an' inploding while I'm reloading whatcha gonna do when I pull this trigger you duck and you hidin but that don't stop the lyin that don't stop the pain don't stop me goin outta my brain so I snap back and write another rap and tell you to all go f@$# a cat cause when I'm done an' ya through and my pistol is smokin and you got holes all through I crack your neck to make sure that you gone and you ain't comin back but when it's all said an done you be dead an ya gone an the truth it rings clear that though I'm alone the world keeps turning
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Post by rissed on May 20, 2003 23:39:46 GMT -5
i like. not really negative i don't think. but at the same time it is. great work dude
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Post by unburntflame on May 22, 2003 19:46:37 GMT -5
a really good poem. i hope we continue to see your work coming to life on our screens!!
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Tiny
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***Everyone deserves to be loved***
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Post by Tiny on May 29, 2003 23:06:51 GMT -5
i love you lots anticaged well not you i don't even know you but your poems keep postin' them sexy poems Tiny
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