Love life

[headspinner]

Love your life
whatever your strife
be free
that's the key

your just a kid
so don't keep a lid
on all that fun
and laughing in the sun

Plenty of time to grow up
live your life while your a pup
too much work and no play
makes you lonely one day

have a goal and work
but be carefull of the fun you shirk
live today and live tomorrow
and we'll all play without sorrow


This is my first go at writing something that doesn't deppress me so sorry if it is no good
Give us some feedback
Thanx
Headspinner

[gooba]

wucked dude pretty good
try sum more un depressing stuff u never know it may work ;D

[rissed]

i like this headspinner, very well-written. i dn't reckon it's negative...more emotional than anything.

[rissed]

btw. if you need to talk to me about ANYTHING. i'm here.
;D

[Tiny]

wow!!
i love it
you're good
you're very good ;D
keep potsing

Tiny

[unburntflame]

as long as you keep a fair balance between the depressing stuff and the happy stuff KEEP WRITING!!!!!!!!! ;D