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Post by unburntflame on Sept 1, 2003 2:04:37 GMT -5
Something deep inside
Like smoke curling and weaving
An emotion too great
For words-thoughts that betray me
Within me my secrets are safe
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Smoke
Sept 3, 2003 10:01:26 GMT -5
Post by firedancer on Sept 3, 2003 10:01:26 GMT -5
I really liked this. It was very inventive. Is this a certain form?
jj
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Smoke
Sept 4, 2003 0:46:27 GMT -5
Post by unburntflame on Sept 4, 2003 0:46:27 GMT -5
yeah, it's written in the tanka style but i like posting all my stuff on the general boards cos i know a lot of people only visit those......i know that cos i used to be one of them!!!! lol
thanks jj!
luv flame
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Smoke
Sept 20, 2011 22:11:02 GMT -5
Post by Debo on Sept 20, 2011 22:11:02 GMT -5
Another great write Flame.
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Smoke
Aug 17, 2013 0:03:15 GMT -5
Post by lonesoul on Aug 17, 2013 0:03:15 GMT -5
Love this ♡♥♡
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spirit
brand, spanking new
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Smoke
May 21, 2023 23:48:04 GMT -5
Post by spirit on May 21, 2023 23:48:04 GMT -5
Love this <3
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