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Window
May 12, 2003 20:09:59 GMT -5
Post by Elisha on May 12, 2003 20:09:59 GMT -5
Thought I saw you out my window Where you used to stand Remembered all the nights it opened You would take my hand You'd lift me out into your arms Quiet as can be Sneaking out into the night Only you and me Listen to your breathing lungs As we stare at the stars Talking of a higher force Or what it's like on mars Thought I saw you standing there Must have been my eyes Opened up the glass again Shaking from my cries And I stepped outside for you And sunk down to my knees And cried some more for memories And please forgive me, please.
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JamesB
just a little green
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Window
May 12, 2003 20:16:16 GMT -5
Post by JamesB on May 12, 2003 20:16:16 GMT -5
terrific, beautiful, never stop writing, I am going to buy a book of your poems in 5 years.
That went straight to the heart, I hope he does forgive you.
-James
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Window
May 12, 2003 20:31:12 GMT -5
Post by Elisha on May 12, 2003 20:31:12 GMT -5
aww thanks james, that was so sweet. I'd give you the book free just for that.
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Window
May 12, 2003 21:36:56 GMT -5
Post by rissed on May 12, 2003 21:36:56 GMT -5
very beautiful. i see it's heartfelt like the rest.
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