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Lost
May 11, 2003 22:05:41 GMT -5
Post by Elisha on May 11, 2003 22:05:41 GMT -5
I'm lost, can't find myself today I guess it's true what people say The only thing that mattered was a lie
I'm looking for myself again So far from all I've ever been Promised to myself I wouldn't cry
Standing here forever Trapped here by your lies Lost again this evening Lost within your eyes
Lying here I see your face I see myself, a big disgrace If only you were here with me tonight
I'd tell you all I never said I'd spill these dreams within my head If only you were here we'd make it right
Standing here forever Trapped here by your lies Lost again this evening Lost within your eyes
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Lost
May 11, 2003 22:07:59 GMT -5
Post by Elisha on May 11, 2003 22:07:59 GMT -5
Actually I wrote this as a song if you couldn't tell. I just didn't ever finish the music so I made it into a poem
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JamesB
just a little green
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Lost
May 12, 2003 23:13:46 GMT -5
Post by JamesB on May 12, 2003 23:13:46 GMT -5
Very interesting piece I like it.
-James
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Lost
May 13, 2003 19:46:30 GMT -5
Post by rissed on May 13, 2003 19:46:30 GMT -5
it's wicked. i love the last line especially. it finishes off the piece perfectly. keep it up, girl!
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