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chaos
May 11, 2003 17:20:48 GMT -5
Post by RiotGirl on May 11, 2003 17:20:48 GMT -5
What if everyone opened their eyes And started looking in the right places. What if they could just stop their madness And roaring insanity for a brief moment, And see that the real beauty lies within. And all this wisdom has gone to waste Because nobody ever heeds the warnings of the sages. No one cares to listen. Senses and emotions gone to chaos, Set on the evils that exist within our tiny little worlds That will in fifty years go unnoticed. No legacy will be left behind by the blinded fool Who walks along thinking he is right, And never takes his chance to love. And never realizes how stupid he really is. Realize Chaos
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May 12, 2003 23:33:29 GMT -5
Post by Elisha on May 12, 2003 23:33:29 GMT -5
Another brilliant poem from riotgirl! This one's awesome, for real. I love it.
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May 13, 2003 15:41:05 GMT -5
Post by RiotGirl on May 13, 2003 15:41:05 GMT -5
Oh goodness! Thanks so much girlie that means a lot to me, but you know you're a goddess too . Always posting something lovely ;D.
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May 13, 2003 19:26:46 GMT -5
Post by rissed on May 13, 2003 19:26:46 GMT -5
you both rock. i love this poem it actually tells a proper story. wicked ;D
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May 13, 2003 21:41:24 GMT -5
Post by RiotGirl on May 13, 2003 21:41:24 GMT -5
Oh joy! I'm so glad that you understand it rissed! My VERY dense friend was like "doy, what does that mean?" I thought it was pretty clear, but then again, my heads messed up anyway . Glad you were able to get something out of it ;D.
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