caged
shows promise
Smile and be happy... THAT'S AN ORDER
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Post by caged on May 7, 2003 23:09:32 GMT -5
I see the moon
racing through the nights sky
forever chasing the sun
but never to catch it
I see the man
the man in the moon
he smiles at me
and so I smile back
I see the moon
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Post by rissed on May 7, 2003 23:50:50 GMT -5
cool. i love this one. the best you've writtten so far i reckon. it has a happy atmosphere to it.
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Post by unburntflame on May 8, 2003 1:17:46 GMT -5
I actually named the moon when I was little. I stayed up late at night talking to him and imagining he talked back. it was very relaxing.
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Post by Elisha on May 8, 2003 9:14:42 GMT -5
Great poem, caged. what is it about the sky that facinates people so much? I can't even look up on a clear night without staying there for at least twenty minutes like that. Maybe it's because we know there's finally something that the great and wonderful humans can't control. Maybe I'm just a crazy b!tch that likes to talk to much, oh well who knows. Love the poem! Keep posting.
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