Tiny
been around the block
***Everyone deserves to be loved***
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Post by Tiny on May 7, 2003 21:06:45 GMT -5
what day is it today? oh dear, now let me see Monday, Tuesday, Wednesday, Thursday no bells ring in me Friday no, that was the other day Saturday no, that was yesterday look outside the sun is shining the birds are singing happily it must be Sunday Sunday what is Sunday? oh, Sunday rings a bell and a smell the scent of flowers, chocolates and tea flow through the air in my memory what day is it today? oh dear, now let me see goodness me, it's mother's day so i'll tell you what you mean to me warm cuddles on the lounge being tucked into bed helping me through every day if it weren't for you, i'd be dead all our family days out which were fun when i was young but now i've grown and it's time to learn to be alone good advice great advice a helping hand when i need and kiss to heel my knee i love you mum through night and day i'll love you always in everyway GOOD THING I'M A POET.
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gooba
been around the block
From your loving neighbourhood gooba!!!!
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Post by gooba on May 7, 2003 21:34:59 GMT -5
thats great ;D i hope you give this to your mum on poems day like print it out on the computer or something like that
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Post by rissed on May 7, 2003 23:57:18 GMT -5
i like. i can relate to that sometimes. be happy chiki forever and always.
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caged
shows promise
Smile and be happy... THAT'S AN ORDER
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Post by caged on May 8, 2003 0:20:15 GMT -5
All I can say is I LOVE IT
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Post by unburntflame on May 8, 2003 1:29:19 GMT -5
......and this one..........
(it's becoming a bit of a habit!!! ) lol. your work is ever improving, tiny.
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Post by Elisha on May 8, 2003 9:10:36 GMT -5
Really awesome poem, tiny! Your mom definately needs to see this, it's really thoughtful.
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