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Post by headspinner on May 6, 2003 7:07:21 GMT -5
The stars are like
Fifteen thousand fireflys
A million fireworks
An infinite sea of candlles blinking with infinite wisdom
but when I look,
into the deep vastness of night
all i see is U
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Tiny
been around the block
***Everyone deserves to be loved***
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Post by Tiny on May 6, 2003 20:15:05 GMT -5
i can't believe i'm the first to reply this is a good poem but it isn't really a vision of beauty beauty is within not something you can see an alternative subject could have been Vastness of night(?) anyway still a beautiful poem keep postin' Tiny  |
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Post by rissed on May 8, 2003 19:38:58 GMT -5
i like. i wish someone felt that way about me still.
whoever you wrote this for is very lucky.
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gooba
been around the block
From your loving neighbourhood gooba!!!!
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Post by gooba on May 8, 2003 20:17:20 GMT -5
wucked poem
i hope you right more poems this one is great
saw some of ur other work and its pretty good to
ur a great poet
gooba
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