Hold my hand..

cassie5395
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Hold my hand.. May 5, 2003 18:54:40 GMT -5

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Post by cassie5395 on May 5, 2003 18:54:40 GMT -5

I thought I loved you once
But you turned away
And I thought I was over you
Until we met today

I walked down the field
My best friend at my side
I wanted to talk to you
But also to run and hide

We said our hello's
Near the bench where you sat
And then we shook hands..
I'm left wondering about that

As I walked by
You held out your hand
Of course I took it in mine
But I don't understand

Did you hold on a little bit longer?
Did you not want to let go?
Or was it just a fluke
I guess I'll never know...

**Winners are the people who when the odds are stacked against them, and those around them have fallen, will have the courage to look within themselves and make the unbelieveable believeable, and the impossible possible**

JamesB just a little green Posts: 64	Hold my hand.. May 5, 2003 19:26:34 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by JamesB on May 5, 2003 19:26:34 GMT -5 very interesting I liked it, but it left me really longing to know... was it just a fluke? Or did they come back? either way bravo -James
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cassie5395
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Hold my hand.. May 5, 2003 20:29:26 GMT -5

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Post by cassie5395 on May 5, 2003 20:29:26 GMT -5

I'm still not sure.. I hope it meant something.. but he's going out with one of my friends now.. so I'm guessing not!! maybe there was something behind it...maybe he does have feelings for me.. sorry I don't mean to ramble, but hey, a girl can hope can't she?

thanks for the reply, i love hearing what other people think about my writing

**Winners are the people who when the odds are stacked against them, and those around them have fallen, will have the courage to look within themselves and make the unbelieveable believeable, and the impossible possible**

Maryann22 poet/Gmod Posts: 721	Hold my hand.. May 5, 2003 21:46:45 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Maryann22 on May 5, 2003 21:46:45 GMT -5 great poem I loved it keep posting. Maryann22

Tiny been around the block *Everyone deserves to be loved* Posts: 100	Hold my hand.. May 6, 2003 0:38:52 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Tiny on May 6, 2003 0:38:52 GMT -5 This poem is soooooooooooooooooooooo sweet it's left my to dead. Tiny
	I'd like to send a message of love, hope, and guidance. if u r interested in talking 2 me about anything in general send me a private message. i'd love to hear what u've been up 2.

gooba been around the block From your loving neighbourhood gooba!!!! Posts: 102	Hold my hand.. May 6, 2003 3:59:57 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by gooba on May 6, 2003 3:59:57 GMT -5 heya i love the poem its so cool and sad at the same time but good as well keep up thegood work cassie
	i was here but now im gone, i left my name to turn you on, those who knew me knew me well but those who dont can go to hell!

rissed poet you say i'm a witch like it's a bad thing! Posts: 234	Hold my hand.. May 6, 2003 5:16:13 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by rissed on May 6, 2003 5:16:13 GMT -5 very beautiful writing. i know how you feel in a way.
	it's wise to look ahead, but foolish to see further than you can look.

Post by cassie5395 on May 5, 2003 18:54:40 GMT -5

Post by JamesB on May 5, 2003 19:26:34 GMT -5

Post by cassie5395 on May 5, 2003 20:29:26 GMT -5

Post by Maryann22 on May 5, 2003 21:46:45 GMT -5

Post by Tiny on May 6, 2003 0:38:52 GMT -5

Post by gooba on May 6, 2003 3:59:57 GMT -5

Post by rissed on May 6, 2003 5:16:13 GMT -5