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caged
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electricity May 4, 2003 19:28:42 GMT -5

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Post by caged on May 4, 2003 19:28:42 GMT -5

ZAP
the power flows through my body
like a raging river
a chilling feeling sweeps over me
I try to pull away
I can't
yet I also find I don't want to
I feel the warm glow of the power
it runs through my soul
like the blood in my viens
and then...
nothing
not
a
single
sound
all is quiet
no birds throwing their songs to the wind
no wolves howling at the full moon
no crickets clicking in full chours...
nothing
not
a
single
sound
all seems a little to quite
ZAP
and then
nothing
no sounds
no power
no nothing
I fall
I hit the ground
all goes black
I think I'll go to sleep now
and then
nothing
no more fun
no more games
no more power
the only thing I know is
ZAP

Last Edit: May 13, 2003 19:45:15 GMT -5 by caged

Today I might be a king and tommorow a poor man but I will always live my life how I want

rissed poet you say i'm a witch like it's a bad thing! Posts: 234	electricity May 4, 2003 20:36:56 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by rissed on May 4, 2003 20:36:56 GMT -5 WOW i like very very much!!!!! that is definitely one of the best that you've written. i love it mate!
	it's wise to look ahead, but foolish to see further than you can look.

gooba been around the block From your loving neighbourhood gooba!!!! Posts: 102	electricity May 4, 2003 23:46:55 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by gooba on May 4, 2003 23:46:55 GMT -5 thats awsome caged love your wwork and will look out for more of it ;D
	i was here but now im gone, i left my name to turn you on, those who knew me knew me well but those who dont can go to hell!

Krystle brand, spanking new Posts: 8	electricity May 5, 2003 0:41:12 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Krystle on May 5, 2003 0:41:12 GMT -5 I love this poam chaged you really have a great talant for writhing poetry.

Maryann22 poet/Gmod Posts: 721	electricity May 5, 2003 21:54:20 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Maryann22 on May 5, 2003 21:54:20 GMT -5 I love all of your poems, they really make you stop and think. Please keep posting. Maryann22

Tiny been around the block *Everyone deserves to be loved* Posts: 100	electricity May 6, 2003 0:33:20 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Tiny on May 6, 2003 0:33:20 GMT -5 you are electrofingly good at poetry Caged. Lovin' it wow Tiny
	I'd like to send a message of love, hope, and guidance. if u r interested in talking 2 me about anything in general send me a private message. i'd love to hear what u've been up 2.

Elisha poet Posts: 297	electricity May 12, 2003 23:50:24 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Elisha on May 12, 2003 23:50:24 GMT -5 Now this is my kind of poetry! Awesome, caged. Truly.
	When the night is almost over, just before the moon goes down The wings of waking angels echo softly all around

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