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Post by Elisha on May 1, 2003 20:14:34 GMT -5
Around it goes, the same old spin You rip me out, I crawl back in Around it goes, around around Pick me up, I fall back down Round and round, unending chain Going numb from all the pain Around around we're never through Find a way to forget you Around it goes, standing still Memories that I can't kill Around, around, a poisoned mind Come and hit me from behind Around it goes, through my head Round and round the words you said Around again, I start to cry Around, around, around this lie.
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Post by Elisha on May 1, 2003 20:22:15 GMT -5
I actually wrote this poem in the eigth grade, and it has always been one of my favorites. I used that first line in another poem my friend and I wrote, the only poem I've ever written with another person called Spin. (Also not all that great of a poem if you want my opinion which you probably dont but there you have it.Maybe I put it on here, I might have but I don't think so. anyway not the point, not that there is one. And I'm still rambling! But anyway I always remembered it and thought it was about time I put it on here. Enjoy Peoples! XOXOXOXOXOXO Elisha!
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Post by Maryann22 on May 6, 2003 23:03:50 GMT -5
WOW is all I can say about this poem. I loved it. Maryann22
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JamesB
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Post by JamesB on May 6, 2003 23:06:48 GMT -5
I like this one alot too, great through line.
-James
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Post by rissed on May 8, 2003 19:31:03 GMT -5
a wicked poem. i like.
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