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Post by Elisha on May 1, 2003 13:00:51 GMT -5
Mirror, mirror, on the wall
How I wish that you would fall
Shattered pieces of my face
Think it must be blood I taste
Mirror, mirror, mocking me
So much more than you see
Different than the other clones
Cheerleaders with megaphones
Mirror, mirror, thing I hate
Reflecting all the world creates
Little silver shards of pain
Making everyone insane
Mirror, mirror on the wall
Think it's time for you to fall.
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Post by Jaysie on May 1, 2003 14:23:11 GMT -5
Elisha!!! I loved this!!!  |
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Post by RiotGirl on May 1, 2003 15:40:37 GMT -5
I really like this too. It is very much my style. I mean, the style that I like. Except, I am actually a cheer leader, as hard as that is to believe. . . . We don't use megaphones though. And we're competition based. We don't even cheer at games. We only do half time stuff. We're very hard core. And definately not all preps. Anyway, justa little insight that we're not all mindless bimbos. It's a lot harder to get into than it was before ;D. There I go again, striving to break stereotypes day after day  . Anyway, I liked the poem a lot. |
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Post by Elisha on May 1, 2003 20:03:19 GMT -5
Thanks for the feedback you guys. I hope you understand I'm not meaning to put you down rg and I'm not saying all cheerleaders are bad. There detestable people in every group there is cheerleaders included. But the whole thing is very symbolic (And yes I also admit that I had certian people in my mind when I wrote that line) so if I offended you any I'm sorry and I didn't mean to but if the poem was any other way it wouldn't mean the same thing to me and that would just be wrong. Thanks for reading!
Luv, alwayz,
Elisha
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Post by RiotGirl on May 1, 2003 20:40:50 GMT -5
Oh don't worry about it. I totally know what you mean. I sort of wrote a poem with cheer leaders in it too, but it was crappy lol. I wasn't offended at all, I just like to get on my soap box every now and then ;D.
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Post by Elisha on May 1, 2003 20:47:04 GMT -5
Don't we all?
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Post by RiotGirl on May 2, 2003 19:27:12 GMT -5
Yes, and I love it  . |
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Post by rissed on May 6, 2003 5:44:20 GMT -5
i love it!!!!! a great poem. well written. keep writing and i shall be sure to keep reading.
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. Anyway, I liked the poem a lot.
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