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Life
Apr 30, 2003 14:56:32 GMT -5
Post by H8ed on Apr 30, 2003 14:56:32 GMT -5
Is this world or life a game? Or a savage beast I cannot tame? I have walked my roads for many years, seen terrible things, and shed many tears. I have wasted many days and tried living different ways. But never once did I fight, until it was too late and I became consumed by night. I sit alone and silent, becoming ever more violent, I wish to wage a war, rape the land and settle my score. Feeling like I've been here too long, I've already been on stage and sung my song. So don't be sad or cry when I go, cause I did get one thing... this tag on my toe.
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Life
May 6, 2003 5:50:09 GMT -5
Post by rissed on May 6, 2003 5:50:09 GMT -5
i like. a bit negative, but hey that's life.
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gooba
been around the block
From your loving neighbourhood gooba!!!!
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May 6, 2003 6:23:30 GMT -5
Post by gooba on May 6, 2003 6:23:30 GMT -5
i like the poem its great and it has a strong (slightly negative) point but still its a great poem well done
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JamesB
just a little green
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May 6, 2003 16:26:40 GMT -5
Post by JamesB on May 6, 2003 16:26:40 GMT -5
I liked "rape the land and settle my score". Powerful words there.
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May 8, 2003 9:51:14 GMT -5
Post by Elisha on May 8, 2003 9:51:14 GMT -5
wow, this is a killer poem. It flows so well...I'm in love. You need to write more, like now.
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