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Post by rissed on Apr 28, 2003 22:15:29 GMT -5
insanity invades my brain there's nothing left to say the past and present leaves me drained and the future begins today i wish there was a way i could tell you to your face but i know that if i did you'd turn in my disgrace i wish i could just talk to you but i don't have the guts so i'll just hope you'll someday stop overriding love with lust so can i still be beautiful in your eyes when i'm not there and if by some bloody miracle you'll see that i can care can i be insane drained scared unprepared disturbed unturned self abused confused hated uncreated alone?
........ i think it's time to stop writing love poems
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gooba
been around the block
From your loving neighbourhood gooba!!!!
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Post by gooba on May 4, 2003 4:05:54 GMT -5
i like the poem rissed keep it up luv gooba
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TrappedDespair
been around the block
How did it come to this...
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Post by TrappedDespair on May 4, 2003 14:52:30 GMT -5
i like i like i like... umm i like what can i say...
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caged
shows promise
Smile and be happy... THAT'S AN ORDER
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Post by caged on May 4, 2003 19:17:06 GMT -5
a well written poem rissed I like the title and how you finish the poem
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