Scream of Metal

Elisha
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Scream of Metal Apr 27, 2003 18:11:38 GMT -5

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Post by Elisha on Apr 27, 2003 18:11:38 GMT -5

Scream of metal, painfull sound
The night my world turned upside down
The glass was raining in my eyes
Please somebody hear my cries
Save me from this twisted mess
Maybe this is for the best
All my clothes are red with blood
Crawling out into the mud
It's hard to move, there's so much pain
Blood runs faster in the rain
Finally see approaching lights
Hope I make it through the night
Broken, bruised, to weak to cry
I guess it was my time to die.

Last Edit: Apr 27, 2003 18:13:13 GMT -5 by Elisha

When the night is almost over, just before the moon goes down
The wings of waking angels echo softly all around

sanket still rather new Posts: 35	Scream of Metal Apr 27, 2003 23:26:12 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by sanket on Apr 27, 2003 23:26:12 GMT -5 u write so good ,wat to say more abt ur poem .its mind blowing.

Elisha poet Posts: 297	Scream of Metal Apr 28, 2003 20:34:25 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Elisha on Apr 28, 2003 20:34:25 GMT -5 thanx, sanket!
	When the night is almost over, just before the moon goes down The wings of waking angels echo softly all around

Maryann22 poet/Gmod Posts: 721	Scream of Metal May 6, 2003 23:18:22 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Maryann22 on May 6, 2003 23:18:22 GMT -5 i would have to agree your poems are really mind blowing. Maryann22

Post by Elisha on Apr 27, 2003 18:11:38 GMT -5

Post by sanket on Apr 27, 2003 23:26:12 GMT -5

Post by Elisha on Apr 28, 2003 20:34:25 GMT -5

Post by Maryann22 on May 6, 2003 23:18:22 GMT -5