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Post by RiotGirl on Apr 27, 2003 18:06:49 GMT -5
A Vampire’s Cry
Can you hear me crying?
Or is it of another world
Are my tears invisible?
Because I don't know why you can't see
The person you have ostracized,
That monster,
She is me.
So I creep through the darkness,
and it was you who sent me here
NOTE: the title to this poem was created by my friend Maharet.
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Post by Elisha on Apr 27, 2003 18:14:56 GMT -5
I love this, very intense!
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Post by RiotGirl on Apr 27, 2003 18:38:13 GMT -5
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sanket
still rather new
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Post by sanket on Apr 27, 2003 23:23:26 GMT -5
its a very nice poem .witha good meaning in it .keep up the good work.  |
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caged
shows promise
Smile and be happy... THAT'S AN ORDER
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Post by caged on Apr 28, 2003 19:35:06 GMT -5
While the poem wasn't really my sort of thing
it was still enjoyable and I would like to read more of your work
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Post by RiotGirl on Apr 28, 2003 22:15:48 GMT -5
Okay  . I think the whole vampire thing is mostly a metaphor. Mostly. . . . ;D. For some reason I'm facinated by them. Anyway, I'd like to read some of your stuff too. |
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Post by Antoinette on May 3, 2003 17:41:41 GMT -5
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Post by RiotGirl on May 3, 2003 18:19:09 GMT -5
*gasp!* I'm honored that you like my stuff! I'm glad that you can relate to my poems because I always write what I feel. It's good to know that there is someone out there who is feeling the same wacky things as me  . |
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Tiny
been around the block
***Everyone deserves to be loved***
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Post by Tiny on May 6, 2003 20:09:06 GMT -5
well what do you know? i used to have this huge crush on Dracula but you didn't need to know that GREAT POEM Tiny  |
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Post by RiotGirl on May 10, 2003 14:30:57 GMT -5
thanks! I love Dracula! Wonderful book.
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. I think the whole vampire thing is mostly a metaphor. Mostly. . . . ;D. For some reason I'm facinated by them. Anyway, I'd like to read some of your stuff too.
