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Post by Elisha on Apr 26, 2003 20:37:40 GMT -5
Losing status, must conform Be like all the rest Adorn myself, their expectations Try and pass the test Personality means nothing Imitation takes control Fighting off unborn impulses Harder than you know Shaking off insignias We tried to create So I can try and be myself It just might be too late Try and make me fall in line It's bad to lose control Depleted and diminished dreams They threw away the goal
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Post by RiotGirl on Apr 27, 2003 15:09:41 GMT -5
This poem totally makes me think of my school and every girl, and now practically every boy in it. They're all contortionists . Ick I say. Ick. I refuse to become this poem! People always tell me the reason they love being around me is because I'm so different ;D. This is a line I often get, "you're not like other girls are you?" Anyway, enough about my social life. . . . Be true to yourself girl, and keep writing . ~rg
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Post by Elisha on Apr 27, 2003 17:41:16 GMT -5
thanks for the comment, I'm glad you get it. It's not only in schools that people feel they must conform, it's society in general. People think if they show any sign of individuality the world they know might shun them. And that does happen a lot. You should stay the way you are, it's totally cool that you are different. I'm not exactly normal myself. I'm glad you enjoyed the poem, look foward to seeing more of your posts on here, luv Elisha
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Post by RiotGirl on Apr 27, 2003 18:00:57 GMT -5
Glad to be of service as always. Uh, not that I was of service. . . . But glad to respond that is ;D.
~rg
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TrappedDespair
been around the block
How did it come to this...
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Post by TrappedDespair on Apr 28, 2003 18:37:05 GMT -5
I like it i really understand it i used to feel the need to be like others but as i grew up i became more me i mean i may not have as many friends but im happy being myself.... society is to fake for free souls...
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Post by rissed on Apr 28, 2003 21:43:14 GMT -5
well done. i wrote a poem similar to that. i like it very much you write well.
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Post by Maryann22 on May 6, 2003 23:16:51 GMT -5
you have a talent girl keep up the great work. Maryann22
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