Trip

[Elisha]

A high pitched shout
A silent night
Keep them out
And kill the light
Kiss the baby
On the head
Step outside
And you'll be dead
Cut the phone lines
Lock the door
They smell the blood
Come back for more
Muddy footprints
Bits of grass
Red streaked knife
And broken glass
Roll of thunder
Screaming wheels
I guess it must have
Been the pills
A sound can't touch
A cry can't feel
So tell me doctor
Are you real?

[Maryann22]

I just wish that I could write as well as you do. Maryann22

[Elisha]

you can, it's not difficult. besides I happen to think all writing is beautifull, it's amazing how people found a way to put thoughts down on paper and make them solid isn't it?

[unburntflame]

i agree, it is amazing. that sort of style of poetry is how i like to write, but it all really depends what i'm writing about and what i'm trying to say.