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Post by Brenpoet on Mar 14, 2003 12:43:26 GMT -5
Respect for all Species Man must learn aright To abuse other Creatures Bids God's anger and might
He gave us dominion Over all He had made For all life is sacred We must do as He bade
In the Garden of Eden Before sin began We talked with all creatures As part of God's plan
God walked among us And all life was love At one with the Creator On Earth as above
May we be worthy Once more in His sight To be seen in His favour And with Him unite
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Clyde
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Post by Clyde on Mar 14, 2003 18:29:53 GMT -5
Good cadence and rhyme, I'm a sucker for this kind of poetry. The title misled me a little, but it pulled me in for the read. Good message too. Thanks
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Post by Alexia on Mar 14, 2003 20:09:10 GMT -5
Amen!!!!! What a wake up call ....thank you. Beautiful write..
Alexia
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Post by Brenpoet on Mar 15, 2003 1:45:59 GMT -5
Thank you very much for your lovely reviews. This issue means a lot to me
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