|
Post by KathyKay4 on Mar 12, 2003 9:37:42 GMT -5
Sometimes I feel I can't carry the load that life places upon my shoulders. From time to time the weight is too heavy and it feels like a ton of boulders.
My body aches and my legs tremble as I try to keep pressing on. But sometimes I feel I can't carry the load because my strength just seems to be gone.
Finally I fall flat down on my face thinking I just can't take another step. Then I hear a soft whisper that says to me; Child arise! I'm here to help!
|
|
Ladeis
brand, spanking new
Just for introductions...I am 20 years old and have always loved poetry and only write what I feel.
Posts: 4
|
Post by Ladeis on Mar 12, 2003 12:55:16 GMT -5
i enjoyed your work and would like to know if you meant for it to sound so spiritual?
|
|