Those Three Words

[SwEeTdReAmS]

The rain falls lightly
on the roof
as i lay here in bed
i dream of you
and the last thing you said
you told me those three words
that everybody wants to hear
you held me close
and quietly whispered in my ear
you said i was the only one
that you dreamed about each night
you said i was your angel
and you'll never let me go
then i laid my head
upon your chest
i told you that i loved you
and you are the best!

i'm open to any suggestions for the ending...i kinda got stuck:)

[Matt]

you said I love you
and turned to leave
the rain falls heavy
on the tin roof
as I lay here in bed
waiting for you
the crunching of gravel
under the wheels
the slam of a car door
as i run down the stairs
I open the door
I fall to my knees
ITS NOT YOU


I did not see any reply so I thought I would leave you one. So I just wrote what ever. Thanx I think your poem is good. I dont care what you think about my ending it was sper of the moment. Thanx

Matt

[SwEeTdReAmS]

thanks for replying matt..i think that your ending was good! you've got talent..keep it up:)

[MysticMind17]

This is a good poem, The ending that you posted matt was good, and you shouldn't ever give up! Talk to you later girly! Bye