nobody knows me

[nobodydatswho]

NO ONE REALLY KNOWS ME
MY FRIENDS DONT KNOW ME MY FAMILY DOESNT EITHER
THEY KNOW THAT IM A PUNK
THEY KNOW THAT I HAVE ATTITUDE
BUT NO ONE REALLY KNOWS ME
I HIDE IN DARKNESS
I LIVE IN PAIN
SOMETIMES I WISH THAT I COULD DIE
AFRAID OF DEATH
I AM NOT
AFRAID OF PAIN
I AM NOT
BUT IF GIVEN A CHANCE TO DIE
I WOULD NOT
FOR I HAVE TO MUCH TO LIVE FOR
I WILL JUST SULK BACK AND SIT IN DARKNESS AND JUST WAIT
wait for death to come....



(so wat do ya think? is it bad )

[nobodydatswho]

i added sumthin but can u guys tell me how bad it is please??


NO ONE REALLY KNOWS ME
MY FRIENDS DONT KNOW ME MY FAMILY DOESNT EITHER
THEY KNOW THAT IM A PUNK
THEY KNOW THAT I HAVE ATTITUDE
BUT NO ONE REALLY KNOWS ME
I HIDE IN DARKNESS
I LIVE IN PAIN
SOMETIMES I WISH THAT I COULD DIE
AFRAID OF DEATH
I AM NOT
AFRAID OF PAIN
I AM NOT
BUT IF GIVEN A CHANCE TO DIE
I WOULD NOT
FOR I HAVE TO MUCH TO LIVE FOR
I WILL JUST SULK BACK AND SIT IN DARKNESS AND JUST WAIT
wait for death to come....
for i am alone.
alone in a cold world full of darkness and dispare
utterly alone

[ladydarkblue]

you speak of your pain and loneliness very well. I am not one to critique very well for i believe what comes out naturally and what feel right for you should stay that way. If it looks and feels better to you go with it. never give up. always keep a pen and paper nearby write all your thoughts and emotions save them and enhance them when you come back to it. keep it up it only gets better.