A Chance for Us

[Lacey Rose]

I want to scream, I want to yell,
My life is a living hell.
I have no one to blame but myself.
Why do I do the things I do?
I know the answer, but shall I confess.
All I wanted was to be loved and caressed.
It seems everytime I fall in love
I set myself up, only to fall.

I want to run I want to hide,
These emotions Im having I can't subside.
I don't know what to do or say,
I'm so lost without you, all I can do is pray.
Why did you do the things you have done?
Only you can answer that, but no one has won.

I want to cry, I want to pout.
I wish I could understand what its all about.
You say you love me, Is it true?
And if it is, why are we so blue.

I want to be happy, I want to be free.
At this moment, Im praying to God to take me,
So I can be free from all this debris.
No matter what may or may not happen,
I will love you forever and alway,
Cause your a part of me,
And if it's meant to be...
There will be a you and me.

I need some time, I need some space,
Are you willing to grant me this grace.
I dont have the answers at this this time,
All I can say, is I have to wait it out,
And hope it all falls into place.

I love you , you love me.
Please be patient, there may be
A chance for "US" to be a "WE"

[Matt]

#1 praying for god to take you away is selfish.
#2 Your signature at the bottom there, is stole.
I dont know if its okay to put other peoples work as your own but keep doing it you'll get recognized.
#3 if you want to know he loves you and you want to know its true. how can you say he loves you?
#4 You have had many repetitive states in your poem.
I can understand your a beginer.

Matt.

[Matt]

But I can also see the talent deep within. I sound rude alot when giving my oppinipn and Im sorry for that.





Matt.

[Lacey Rose]

Hi Matt,
No need to be sorry...but thanks all the same.
And as for the signiture part...I took it off, I did not know you couldn't do that...Iv'e seen other's that were being used when they shouldn't be...I don't know if's it ok or not...but I took it off...I just really liked the saying and didn't know who it came from...but thats not how I want to get noticed...taking something from someone else.

LR

[Matt]

Its alright to state some one elses work in your signature. Just write who its by, for example:

You may say Im a dreamer, but Im not the only one.
I hope some day you'll join me, and the world will live as one.

: John Lennon

Thanx

Matt.

[Lacey Rose]

thanks for the infro....but I don't know who it's from...
But I really like that quote...I try to live by it...but well thats not alway the case...feelings and emotions get in the way sometimes...but I do try.





LR