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Tears
Mar 9, 2003 15:48:24 GMT -5
Post by Alexia on Mar 9, 2003 15:48:24 GMT -5
Head tilted on the window pane, Tearstained letter still in her hand. She gazes through the darkened night, Oblivious to sight and sound.
Mind wondering to a better time When darkness never loomed. As one by one the raindrops fall, She hangs her head in gloom.
The street lights blurred by falling drops Enhance the sadness in her heart. Sweet memories unfold before her As she stares out towards the park.
Remembering their days of love, As they strolled along the paths. Never knowing that the end would come. But it has reached at last.
She looks upon the window pane And notices no rain. The drops that she had seen before Were tears she’d cried in vain.
Alexia 2003
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Tears
Mar 9, 2003 17:01:08 GMT -5
Post by Maryann22 on Mar 9, 2003 17:01:08 GMT -5
this is a really good poem. it really makes you think. keep up the good work.
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Tears
Mar 10, 2003 10:50:26 GMT -5
Post by Alexia on Mar 10, 2003 10:50:26 GMT -5
Thank you . Well appreciated.
Alexia
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Tears
Mar 11, 2003 4:41:23 GMT -5
Post by engarde on Mar 11, 2003 4:41:23 GMT -5
I like the raindrops that were really tears in the end, well said!
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Tears
Mar 11, 2003 19:29:57 GMT -5
Post by Matt on Mar 11, 2003 19:29:57 GMT -5
I also found your poem was well thought. I have read most of your poems and enjoyed them truely.
Matt S. Spatola
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Tears
Mar 11, 2003 21:02:19 GMT -5
Post by Alexia on Mar 11, 2003 21:02:19 GMT -5
Thanks Matt.....I look forward to reading more of yours...
Alexia
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Tears
Mar 12, 2003 16:54:38 GMT -5
Post by Matt on Mar 12, 2003 16:54:38 GMT -5
Your very welcome. I dont very often reply, but to yours I will because they are great. Keep it up and inspire the world.
thanx again
Matt.
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Tears
Mar 14, 2003 18:14:06 GMT -5
Post by Matt on Mar 14, 2003 18:14:06 GMT -5
I'll put you number one any day.
Matt.
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Tears
Mar 14, 2003 20:04:25 GMT -5
Post by Alexia on Mar 14, 2003 20:04:25 GMT -5
What a sweet reply....Thank you .
Alexia
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Tears
Mar 15, 2003 13:16:52 GMT -5
Post by VixenOfDestiny on Mar 15, 2003 13:16:52 GMT -5
Very nicely written Alexia... you do have some true talent, keep up the wonderful work! ;D
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