Nchumki
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"World is not a pleasant place to be without someone"
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Post by Nchumki on Mar 8, 2003 15:24:29 GMT -5
We’ve talked so many times But we haven’t seen each other yet My tiny mind desire to see you To see you for one time Only one time… Will I never see you? You’ve hidden into my heart Will you hid forever? You haven’t hold my hand yet Will you never hold my hand? You stayed apart until now Will you never come near? You’ve loved me that no one ever did Will you love me forever? I have so many things undone So many things unspoken So many things unknown Will I never get a chance to do? But it doesn’t matter I will wait for you until you come I believe one day you will come But WHEN?
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Post by Maryann22 on Mar 9, 2003 21:26:21 GMT -5
this poem is so romantic keep up the good work
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Post by engarde on Mar 10, 2003 5:31:53 GMT -5
I love the way you injected repeating questions, gives it such a real feeling to it. Thanks!
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Nchumki
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"World is not a pleasant place to be without someone"
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Post by Nchumki on Mar 10, 2003 16:05:06 GMT -5
Thank you...Maryann
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Nchumki
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"World is not a pleasant place to be without someone"
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Post by Nchumki on Mar 10, 2003 16:07:11 GMT -5
Thank you so much engarde. you know what its really a true feellings because it happened with someone in real!!
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