For I'm Sorry

[Elisha]

What hurts is how I acted
I was such a jerk
I lied to you, I hurt you
This time I really learned.
I went to say I'm sorry
One more time but you were gone
You weren't mine to begin with
Now I realize what I've done
It's to late to kill the memories
And I write this note just so
By chance you might just hear me
You would finally know
For all the fun we had together
Even thought she was right there
The night that you first liked me
The night that I first cared
Now my heart stands still forever
Because you're not in my life
If I could take it back I'd never
Mess aroung with the disguise
Here's for I'm Sorry.

[ShInE]

i loved this...i can really relate to it. it brought back some memories and it's strange to see exactly what i was feeling put down into words

[Maryann22]

this poem is really good but I think it could use just alittle bit of work. Maybe I am wrong but I'm just telling you what I think. Maryann22

[rissed]

beautiful. it hink it's great.