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Post by Alexia on Mar 5, 2003 14:10:28 GMT -5
You ask me all about myself. Why bother if you’re just passing through. Oh how you love me so very much, Then excitement wears off and boredom sets in.
Familiar patterns begin to form. Preparing me for what’s to come Forgotten phone calls because you slept Cancelled dates for sudden emergencies.
Bit by bit distance grows, Until suddenly those familiar words. “It’s not you, it’s me……” And again a heart has been broken.
So if you’re passing through my dear. Don’t even hang your hat. Don’t ask my name, don’t say hello. For I’ve not time for a broken heart.
Alexia 2003
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Post by engarde on Mar 5, 2003 21:19:13 GMT -5
"Preparing me for what’s to come"
Good line and it works well in your poem
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Post by Alexia on Mar 6, 2003 18:36:59 GMT -5
Thank you. But there is still so much to learn. Sure wish I could write like some of the people in this room. Wow.....
Alexia
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Post by Joy on Mar 6, 2003 22:05:53 GMT -5
That poems is so true.Interesting.
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Post by Maryann22 on Mar 6, 2003 23:25:51 GMT -5
i really like it. it rings so true.
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