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Post by Yellie on Mar 4, 2003 20:56:42 GMT -5
Dancing with my crucifix,
I am falling and falling, falling in the snow.
forward and forward, out of control,
Wild baby, made child, don't let go
Demon,
demon I call your name.
I'm burning and burning in your flame.
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Post by aj on Mar 5, 2003 15:18:51 GMT -5
It's crazy! Just like obsession. Nice work, Yellie!
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Post by engarde on Mar 5, 2003 20:57:53 GMT -5
Repeating words give this flair! Well done...
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Post by Maryann22 on Mar 9, 2003 22:19:43 GMT -5
great poem
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Post by Alexia on Mar 9, 2003 22:26:18 GMT -5
But yet another great one......Thank you
Alexia
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