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Blinded
Mar 2, 2003 18:55:28 GMT -5
Post by Yellie on Mar 2, 2003 18:55:28 GMT -5
Am cold… feet blue. Sky’s dropping, purple dew. Can’t see, can’t see… am blinded by light. But I listen, I listen, I listen through the night. I smile, and I smile, and I smile at the start! Of my dancing flaming, green moving heart.
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Blinded
Mar 2, 2003 18:56:08 GMT -5
Post by Yellie on Mar 2, 2003 18:56:08 GMT -5
hi posted this poem here in sted cause I decided to enter another one for the competition.
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Blinded
Mar 2, 2003 20:45:44 GMT -5
Post by aj on Mar 2, 2003 20:45:44 GMT -5
You can enter up to three I believe, Yellie.
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Post by engarde on Mar 3, 2003 4:43:02 GMT -5
I love the beat to this poem, it sounds like a song!
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Blinded
Mar 9, 2003 22:59:54 GMT -5
Post by Maryann22 on Mar 9, 2003 22:59:54 GMT -5
you really have a way with words keep writing i love to read your poems
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