Clyde
been around the block
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Post by Clyde on Mar 1, 2003 21:45:05 GMT -5
What Can I Say?
Too often I take for granted, my blessings from above, and friends that help relentlessly, what could I be thinking of?
How can I be so nonchalant? Why is it I can’t here? It seems that somehow I ignore the things that are so near.
Albeit I may be busy, but it wouldn’t hurt to try, to remember on occasion someone other than I.
Now it’s not an active process, of thought that came to be, yet somehow I loose sight, when I concentrate on me.
Knowledge and understanding, have touched me once again, and I hope my callous ways, have not caused too much pain.
So in this feeble attempt, my indifference I now rend! I hope you can accept, the apology I send.
Hidden message to all who read.
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Post by engarde on Mar 3, 2003 4:56:46 GMT -5
And thanks to you too Clyde, not only for posting your wonderful poetry but for being an active member here!
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Clyde
been around the block
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Post by Clyde on Mar 3, 2003 7:24:34 GMT -5
By the way folks, your looking for two words. Good luck.
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Clyde
been around the block
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Post by Clyde on Mar 7, 2003 11:12:00 GMT -5
I just learned how to modify, what a great option. My work gets modified alot, I can't seem to get it right the first time. But for this one the message is still there, just changed some words and some punctuation. I think it flows better now, and you still need to find two words, remember 'First and Last' (in each stanza)
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Post by Maryann22 on Mar 9, 2003 21:57:16 GMT -5
keep up the good work.
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Post by namrebmun on Mar 19, 2003 21:06:26 GMT -5
First I have to figure out how to use this site, I keep ending up on page one and then I have to try to remember where I was. But I think I have the answer to your hidden message, how do I check?
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Clyde
been around the block
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Post by Clyde on Mar 26, 2003 22:30:51 GMT -5
I think it's been on long enough. The first letter of each stanza T H A N K S and the last letter of each stanza F R I E N D.
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John
newbie
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Post by John on Jun 3, 2003 17:18:42 GMT -5
Why the First and Last?
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cjh
brand, spanking new
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Post by cjh on Feb 17, 2018 15:58:11 GMT -5
I see I spelled hear wrong in the first stanza, I wonder how I can change that.
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