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Post by rubbanekk on Feb 28, 2003 18:10:21 GMT -5
As times seem to always get harder Just dont know when it all started As time goes by days seem to get longer I need to find a way to become stronger
I wish I knew when it all turned bad Now everything seems so dam sad I wish I could turn back the hands of time But now all of this shit is making me lose my mind
I have grown into leading a rough life Sometimes I just feel like taking a knife When will I wake up and see the light? I look in the mirror, All I see is fright
One day my son said "dad everythings gonna be alright" I then decided, I wasn't ready to give up the fight!
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Post by rubbanekk on Feb 28, 2003 22:47:17 GMT -5
please leave any criticism good or bad, it will only make me a better poet. Thankyou
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Post by MysticMind17 on Mar 2, 2003 1:37:02 GMT -5
This poem really spoke to me, lately i've been having problems with things and This made me think twice! Thanks you very much!
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Post by Alexia on Mar 2, 2003 22:30:56 GMT -5
How very familiar this sounds, distant memories brought forward. Thank you reminding me that there are better days if we just remain strong and don't give up....and how the truth comes from the mouth of babes......very nice, I enjoyed this. Thanks
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Post by Maryann22 on Mar 9, 2003 23:21:35 GMT -5
you never really hear it until a kid says it and when you hear finally it makes your day. keep up the great work
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