I'm Sorry

SwEeTdReAmS
been around the block

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Posts: 142

I'm Sorry Feb 25, 2003 22:18:27 GMT -5

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Post by SwEeTdReAmS on Feb 25, 2003 22:18:27 GMT -5

I'm sorry if i hurt you
and if i wasn't there
im sorry if it seemed like
i didn't care
im sorry if i made you feel
you weren't good enough for me
do you remember in the beginning
how close we use to be
im sorry if you hate me
but always know its true
whether we are talking
or aren't even friend
i'll be here for you!

Last Edit: Feb 26, 2003 17:41:10 GMT -5 by SwEeTdReAmS

"The truth, is you can slit my throat and with my one last ghasp of breath I'd apologize for bleeding on your shirt"- Taking Back Sunday

ResQ381 been around the block Posts: 133	I'm Sorry Feb 25, 2003 22:59:29 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by ResQ381 on Feb 25, 2003 22:59:29 GMT -5 You have a lot of talant. Keep wittin'
	Smiles Beca

MysticMind17
shows promise

Posts: 84

I'm Sorry Feb 26, 2003 0:57:45 GMT -5

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Post by MysticMind17 on Feb 26, 2003 0:57:45 GMT -5

I really like this poem! I put my goal at like 3 poems a day, and TRY to do variations, for someone reason i stick to like love, and hurt, the basics, sometimes you have to be realy really creative. BEST of luck with your poems girly! Talk to ya soon! BYe sweets

Maryann22 poet/Gmod Posts: 721	I'm Sorry Mar 10, 2003 7:51:28 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Maryann22 on Mar 10, 2003 7:51:28 GMT -5 great poem

Post by SwEeTdReAmS on Feb 25, 2003 22:18:27 GMT -5

Post by ResQ381 on Feb 25, 2003 22:59:29 GMT -5

Post by MysticMind17 on Feb 26, 2003 0:57:45 GMT -5

Post by Maryann22 on Mar 10, 2003 7:51:28 GMT -5