Hell, Today

[kawazu13]

she looks in her mirror
and wishes her good-bye
where did she go wrong?
a solitary tear
crawls down her cheek
she tried to be strong
but the confusion and fear
overcame the rest
shes lonely and bleak
and nobody cares
shes never the best
she stares at the sun
in wonder of God
happiness is simply
a mask that she wears
"am i the only one
who cant take it nemore?"
the sky doesnt answer
it simply turns gray
she the only one shell die for
her tears stay at bay
not a person will care
the hole looks so dark
Satin glows in her mind
will she dare
greet him
for that mind breakin pain
will be welcomed
if she does
what she has planned
theres only gain
nothin to loose
fingers numb
she pulls surely
she hopes for some love
in the place she will be
the hate of humans build
and its over
on bang
one noise
the end
she drops to the floor
not even a yell
she cant feel the dor
as it opens
i see her body
and run from Hell

[engarde]

I like the bleakness of this and your format....

"the sky doesnt answer
it simply turns gray"

That's a great line but I don't understand the following line:

she the only one shell die for

I suspect it's a typo?

[Maryann22]

nice